Post by Shadowfax on Jan 17, 2006 12:47:59 GMT -5
Okay here are two summeries of two storries I'm writing. Tell me what you think and how I can do them better.
The Last Ranger(working title)
Book 1- The Begining(working title)
(I'll try to get this one posted soon)
Arrow of the clan of the wolf, had always lived a peaceful life of a ranger. He and the infumouse band of the far north, Sade, Cloak, and Dontay, lived a very ranger like life, protecting their woods and one another. This bound is put to the test when Turi, the high kings right hand man, tells them they must leave their woods. Arrow puts up a fight and is taken to jail. The three other men track him in vain and are fourseced to find new lives.
Meanwhile Arrow isbefriend by a starange halfing, dubed Ishkabaha by the natives and Morgan by herself who will tell him nothing about her or the starange name she has for him. In her final attemp to save him she is beat almost to death and left to die.
Book 2- No title
Almost a year has past sence the band of four was fourced to leave their woods and their lives are very differnt now.
Sade, the man of noble blood is now nothing more than a commen theif. He lives on the outskirts of town and steals scraps of food. Dontay on the other hand is a street performer who is making a good name for himself, he is looking for his old friends. He finds Sade but not an old friend for they both have changed beyound reconition.
Arrow is now lost and living like a poor ranger. He can barly stay alive. He is on the trail of a strange figure he has seen who hums a song he once knew. One night on his quest he stumbles on a wolf pair and their pups. His rembers something from a time that seems so long ago and has to decide whether to go on with his fruitless quest.
Book 3-No title(still a brain strom)
The band of four is somewhat united. Now they quest to find each other and bring down the empore who caused them so much pain.
No Title(still working on this one)
Crimson is a halfing and a stranger to the city folk. She lives in the deep south forest far from her sister, who she views as stupid, a fool, and a distarace to their name. She has a few friends the most prominate is Vercin the faun. While walking to their home oneday they discover an injuered ex-solider from the west named Riley. After he is brought back from death's door he tells his story and show his true personality, bold and somewhat rash.
With her faun friend and the bold knight Crimson desicover a world she never knew about in her woods and decides to help her sister who needs the such a thing very much.
The Last Ranger(working title)
Book 1- The Begining(working title)
(I'll try to get this one posted soon)
Arrow of the clan of the wolf, had always lived a peaceful life of a ranger. He and the infumouse band of the far north, Sade, Cloak, and Dontay, lived a very ranger like life, protecting their woods and one another. This bound is put to the test when Turi, the high kings right hand man, tells them they must leave their woods. Arrow puts up a fight and is taken to jail. The three other men track him in vain and are fourseced to find new lives.
Meanwhile Arrow isbefriend by a starange halfing, dubed Ishkabaha by the natives and Morgan by herself who will tell him nothing about her or the starange name she has for him. In her final attemp to save him she is beat almost to death and left to die.
Book 2- No title
Almost a year has past sence the band of four was fourced to leave their woods and their lives are very differnt now.
Sade, the man of noble blood is now nothing more than a commen theif. He lives on the outskirts of town and steals scraps of food. Dontay on the other hand is a street performer who is making a good name for himself, he is looking for his old friends. He finds Sade but not an old friend for they both have changed beyound reconition.
Arrow is now lost and living like a poor ranger. He can barly stay alive. He is on the trail of a strange figure he has seen who hums a song he once knew. One night on his quest he stumbles on a wolf pair and their pups. His rembers something from a time that seems so long ago and has to decide whether to go on with his fruitless quest.
Book 3-No title(still a brain strom)
The band of four is somewhat united. Now they quest to find each other and bring down the empore who caused them so much pain.
No Title(still working on this one)
Crimson is a halfing and a stranger to the city folk. She lives in the deep south forest far from her sister, who she views as stupid, a fool, and a distarace to their name. She has a few friends the most prominate is Vercin the faun. While walking to their home oneday they discover an injuered ex-solider from the west named Riley. After he is brought back from death's door he tells his story and show his true personality, bold and somewhat rash.
With her faun friend and the bold knight Crimson desicover a world she never knew about in her woods and decides to help her sister who needs the such a thing very much.
