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Post by Shadowfax on Dec 9, 2005 13:12:28 GMT -5
Okay this is where people who want to know what others think of their rpg posts(or at least intro posts) can have them judged. This should be useful to people new to the rpg world to get help on how to make their first post supper.
If you want to give tips please have some experice in this kind of rpg.
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Post by winxqueen16 on Dec 22, 2005 15:40:42 GMT -5
Prana stopped and waited , glancing at her watch . 4:20 pm. She sighed and looked back up , scanning the streets for Micheal . Finally she spotted him and someone else. Great , she had to come along ! This day absolutly rules... . She rolled her eyes , but as they came closer , put on a i'm-so-happy-to-see-you-act . " Hey Ross ! Oh , hey...I'm sorry but i forgot your name. What was it again ?" She asked kindly . Micheal smiled and kicked his board up , grabbing it and holding it as the three met up . " What up ?" he said nodding cooly . Micheal was a cool , laid back kinda guy .In his spare time , he simply wrote songs about his life , or fixed stuff. Unlike many of the other Rostas , he didn't smoke ciggerettes much , and rarely ever smoked pot . He was often called a Berretas , as a joke though , by his fellow Rastas . He had , shortly after meeting her , developed a complete crush on Morgana . It had been almost two , maybe three years since he had meet her , and now knew he was in love . Prana and anyone else who knew him , knew why he didn't date , or even flirt . Micheal wasn't interested in anyone , but Morgana. Personally , for this post i felt a little wordy , but i would like to hear other veiws on this post . Thank you ! |
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Post by winxqueen16 on Dec 27, 2005 13:11:02 GMT -5
*Sigh* anyone ?
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Post by RoherynLOTR on Jan 5, 2006 21:57:41 GMT -5
Yeah, I think it is a little wordy... but it has good descriptions...
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Post by winxqueen16 on Jan 5, 2006 22:24:55 GMT -5
yeah . i thought so too . lol , thanks ! i'll work with my wordiness ! ^.^'
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