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Post by Shadowfax on Dec 9, 2005 13:07:11 GMT -5
Okay this is where people who want to know what others think of their rpg posts(or at least intro posts) can have them judged. This should be useful to people new to the rpg world to get help on how to make their first post supper.
This is for the people who want to play in the fasnty and/or Historical fiction section. So if you are going to give tips its alright if you dont play there but I would highly recomend that you have some experence in this catagory.
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Post by RoherynLOTR on Dec 11, 2005 21:05:17 GMT -5
As you stand on the warm hatching sands, you hear the humming of the older dragons. You wait, tense and expectant, when suddenly, a loud CRACK, splits the air. The eggs are hatching!! You wait, hoping a hatchling will pick you. You see them stumbling around and suddenly you hear in you're head I'm HUNGRY!
You have Impressed, this hatchling has now made you it's lifelong partner. Are you ready?
If you are boy, it would make it a lot easier if you could make you name easy to shorten. (EX: Kevin, shortens to K'vin) Also, Girls can impress gold and green dragons. Boys can impress bronze, brown, blue and green dragons.
You need:
Name:
Nick:
Age (between 10-21):
Gender:
Looks:
Personality:
Other:
Mine
Name: Jaxom
Nick: ?
Age (between 10-21): 13
Gender: male
Looks: tall, brown hair, hazel eyes
Personality: you'll see
Other: Lord Holder of Ruatha
I will also play some of the older dragon riders at Benden weyr. (F'lar, Lessa, and F'nor)
((I'm just curious to see what others say...))
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Post by winxqueen16 on Dec 12, 2005 9:22:00 GMT -5
on a scale from 1-10 i would say it is about a 7 . It is already , but for Fantasy , entries should be a little serious i think. The "I'mHungry" thing just made me laugh . I think that the more serious and intense it is , the btter . I would liek to compliment you on your describtions though. Good job overall !!! ^_^ (wow , my fingers are cold and i can't type. x-x)
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Post by RoherynLOTR on Dec 21, 2005 22:15:28 GMT -5
The Wheel of Time turns, and Ages come and pass. What was, what will be, and what is, may yet fall under the shadow.
You live in a quiet village, until one day the Seanchan come. They come with a’dam, and damane. They tell your village that they are searching for sul’dam. They let many try, and a few are capable. These are taken away to be trained. Secretly they are also on the look out for those who can channel the One Power, or marath’damane. These are taken away and never seen again, as often as not. If they are, they were a’dam, and are damane. To be sul’dam, is an honor. To be damane, is worse than death.
Damane are born with the power to channel. Sul’dam, although they would never admit it, must be born with the ability to be taught to channel or they wouldn’t be sul’dam.
Glossary:
~A’dam (aye-dam): a collar and bracelet, linked by a silvery leash that is used to control, against her will, any woman that can channel
~Damane (dah-mahn-ee) “Leashed Ones” Women who can channel that are held against their will by a’dam
~Marath’damane (Mah-rahth’dah-mahn-ee) “Those who must be Leashed” any woman who can channel that has not been captured and collared
~One Power the power drawn from the True Source, which is the driving force of the universe, only woman can touch the true power, and it is called channeling, or touching saidar (sah-ih-dahr)
~Sul’dam (suhl-dahm) a woman who has passed the tests to show that she can wear a bracelet of an a’dam and control a damane
You can be either, a Sul’dam, a damane, marath’damane (or Aes Sedai), a servant or just a normal townsperson.
Info~
Name:
Nick:
Age:
Gender:
Looks:
Personality (op.):
Rank:
Other:
Mine~
Name: Egwene al’Vere (Eh-gwain ahl-veer)
Nick: Egwene
Age: ?
Gender: female
Looks: on the short side, long brown hair, long or with a ribbon, brown eyes
Personality (op.):
Rank: Aes Sedai (in training)
Other:
Name: Renna (reen-nah
Nick: Renna
Age: ?
Gender: female
Looks: long, dark hair, brown eyes
Personality (op.):
Rank: sul’dam
Other:
How 'bout this one? It's for an RPG called Leashed Ones...
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Post by winxqueen16 on Dec 21, 2005 22:39:19 GMT -5
^.^ Amazing ! I would love to give you a 8.3 !!! YEAH !!! ^.^
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Post by RoherynLOTR on Dec 21, 2005 22:42:20 GMT -5
Thanks! You could join it if you want...
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Post by winxqueen16 on Dec 22, 2005 11:18:33 GMT -5
i wouylkd join , but i am in a junk load of RPGs right now. *sigh*
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